Focus Writing 2

Once there was a daredevil, this daredevil was called Tog Lomar. Tog was always a curious boy ever since he was 3 years old when he got his toy dog Jeffry-star. He always believed that as long as he had Jeffry-star, he would never be harmed. His mum knew one day that he would get hurt, but surprisingly he never did get hurt. This story is about when Tog finally learnt that his teddy was not lucky but he was. It all started on September 12th 1998 when he was going to do his biggest stunt ever. He was going to drift from Christchurch all the way to Karamea. Only five weeks earlier he had learnt how to drive stick, and only two weeks earlier he learnt how to drift, he was nervous but not that scared because he had Jeffry-star. He drifts and when he gets there he realises Jeffry-star is gone. He then realised he didn’t need Jeffry-star.