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Thursday, September 16, 2021

My Alien Pet

 This is OLON the Alien, OLON stands for Overprotective

Lost

Old

Nesfek

I cannot pronounce his actual name.
Their species is the Nesfek. They are the most dangerous tribe of Aliens and I Befriended one. Nesfek’s are known to kill their prey by impaling their heads on sharpened sticks and eating their flesh. OLON has just told me that he is their leader and his people will launch an attack on our planet for “capturing” their leader.


 I found him huddled outside our house in the rain, I took him inside and hid him from my family. I named him OLON because he is very old and protective of me. That day he told me he could have killed me but he saw into the future through my eyes. Now we are good friends but what will happen once he launches an attack on earth… 


Today is Monday so I have to go to school and leave OLON, he says bye and I leave… I am back from school and he has set up a satellite on my house roof!...


2 comments:

  1. Hi Kaeden, I love this story, and how you made a poem out of his name. Next time you could add more describing words e.g his skin is as smooth as a snow globe, or something. Great job!

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