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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Annoying my step-dad

Annoying Steve.

I don't mean to sing,hum and talk every 2 seconds.
I know you tell me to shush for more than five minutes.
I think saying that I talk every five minutes is a compliment.
I am pleased I have a great step-dad otherwise you would freak out.
I play fortnite with you but that doesn't mean that I stop talking.
So basically you can never escape my insanity.

If it wasn't for Steve none of this would have happened.

This was very fun to make, hope you liked my poem.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kaeden!
    That was a great wee poem, with some excellent and descriptive words, and good construction. Great use of punctuation as well! Oh, and I don't want you to stop talking ha ha! Talking isn't insanity; it would be insanity to not talk to most people. Keep up the great work :)

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  2. Very creative, Kaeden, The way you have structured it, beginning each sentence except the last the same way, is a good poetic structure. Would you you mind if I shared this as an example to inspire others?

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    1. I am fine if you share it with others it doesn't bother me, thank you for the comment.

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