Pixel
Pixel is the most beautiful white-swiss Shepherd cross with a springer-spaniel. Pixel has the most beautiful golden fur it is lIke the golden sunset in the evening. Her beautiful dusty brown eyes. She has a lovely long snout and beautiful long ears. Pixel also has a massive tail that mum and Steve joke about saying her tail is longer than her legs. She is my favorite girl puppy alive.
I love you pixel.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
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Hi Kaeden!
ReplyDeleteAnother very nice story! I loved the descriptive words, which painted a very clear picture to me. Just a small comment though, with just to have a wee check over your work to see if there's any grammar that might need look at (example: at the start, you have "Pixel is a the most..." - she is one of those things, but maybe not all? If you see what I mean :) You could delete the "a" or "the" which would help to make that sentence make more accurate. Otherwise, I thought you did a great job of it!
Look forward to reading more of your work :)
Lots of love
Dad